I've never really put down on paper what exactly their story is, so here. (Warnings for vagueness):
Basically, Chief (left) is a 25 year old ex-art student who has weird dreams about Emily, (right) who may or may not be a succubus. Also, Chief is a lesbian, and may or may not be extremely attracted to her nightly visitor. This takes place in a post apocalypse world that is just starting to recover from said apocalypse (which happened 2-3 years before the story), so she lives in a small tribe/town like thing, and everyone in the tribe/town is taught survival and combat skills to fight off the evil creatures that have started popping up.
Sometime after the dreams start, someone spots a mysterious woman (read: Emily) in a nearby city, and everyone packs up and goes to hunt her down (cause she's either a monster or a survivor,) and they end up finding her and she beats the tar out of them and kidnaps Chief and they live happily ever after (or not).
Not original, but I like it.

Also, this pic is vey similar to one of my old ones:
[link]I like this one more.

Drawing is great, nice lines, original style, characters are nicely proportioned (no overlarge or tiny limbs), realistic expressions and posing; relays Chief and Emily's character and the dynamics of their relationship - so really good drawing.
Background story...very intriguing.. Emily sounds like a dangerous woman and that's always provocative in a story because you're always questioning their intentions. And who wouldn't want a nightly visit from Emily especially when it means a break from their reality of a devastated post-apocolyptic world. I'd definitely like to read this if you turn this into a comic or even one of your visual novels
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